Ajimbo's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[So Many Ways to Die]

That had some really funny ones.

WEll, graphics weren't great as you probably know (stick figures), style has been done before, and it sounded like you didn't have many options for your sound.

But man, I really thought the tetris one was creative, The airplane one made me laugh. For real.

my one request: on your next one don't use stick figures... takes longer, but it's more enjoyable. As for entertainment, you got some good violent skill.

James

[Religion Sucks]

This should have been blammed

You didnt back up your argument. You just put the statement in and drew a stick devil killing some angel. correct me if I'm wrong, but isnt satan part of religion.

art was fine. make something more worth your time.

ajimbo

[The Supermarket]

Aww man that was good!

Yeah that was great, I'm glad Canada doesnt have guns everywhere! The graphics and animation were great, lots of detail, in the guns especially. All those paint lines you did began to add up. Thats why the animation took up sooo much space. Im pretty sure if you draw one big line instead of seven or ten smaller lines it takes up less space and the animation runs more smooth. You lose the style though. GREAT JOB!!!!!

James

Loved the ending

dilosh responds:

thanks, yeah, i guess that's the reason for its huge file size, as well... gonna use simpler images for the next flash.

[EtaBeta frenzy]

Not bad at all !!

I liked it. Good morals, great music, and great drawings too!

If I were to make one suggestion, I would suggest for you to write a story and then animate it. Then put in some music. Too many people put an animation theme and song together and then submit it. (I don't deny doin it myself

But I liked it alot

EtaBeta responds:

Hehe i am writing a long story, about a guy beeing dismissed by his home and try to allie his enimies. It will take a long while, first i shall complete my comedy about Warld OF Warcraft (great game :D).

[December's Chill 2]

I like it.

The art was good, animation could use some help.. (ie when the snow was falling, a whole bunch would appear in the middle of the screen then fall, not that hard to fix)The one thing that bugged me, was when you were panning across the ground, the sun went out of the shot with everything else... to make it more realistic, make it follow the pan. Little things like that make the animation more enjoyable. I liked the bunny rabbit ;)

James

[Robot Friend]

That was ok.

At first i thought the machine just never found a friend. If that happened i would have been a tad dissapointed. I liked the ending.

There was nothing wrong with it at all, infact it was all good. I don't know, it just wasnt as interesting as some of them on this site.

I look forward to seeing you do another one.

good job

[Bowling: The Pins Revenge]

needed more to it

liked the 2 pins behind the one that shot the bowling ball. didnt look like it took you tooo long. what i would suggest is to have the bowling balls get pissed off after there buddy died and then have a huge battle scene... bowling balls vs bowling pins. you know like in starwars and stuff. just an idea. liked the art..
james

[A Christmas Carol]

overall, I enjoyed this

interesting to see A Christmas Carol
in 5 minutes.
cool animation style.
musical lyrics good but not my taste in genre

[On the Inside]

needs some work.

there are too many frames. it makes it go too slow..

example. after you made the guy knife the sweeper in the head, you had the guy walk off. more speed needed there

if your gonna do stickmen animation they should have something that all the other stickman animations dont have. be creative.

actually drawing characters looks better than stickmen anyways..

good try

[The Chase From The FBI]

loved it..

ha i dont know where to start! I loved the art, and i DONT think you should redraw their faces! Good style... my sound wasnt working so i couldnt review that, but the rest was really good. Keep up the good work!