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The art was good, animation could use some help.. (ie when the snow was falling, a whole bunch would appear in the middle of the screen then fall, not that hard to fix)The one thing that bugged me, was when you were panning across the ground, the sun went out of the shot with everything else... to make it more realistic, make it follow the pan. Little things like that make the animation more enjoyable. I liked the bunny rabbit ;)
James
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Hey man!!! good idea! I love those types of games. You should make another one and draw the whole thing with different backgrounds, and soldiers to pick with each level passed. Ever played the Bow and Arrow one on Ebaumsworld? make one like that with cannons.
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Yeah i have played that
its hilarious!
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At first i thought the machine just never found a friend. If that happened i would have been a tad dissapointed. I liked the ending.
There was nothing wrong with it at all, infact it was all good. I don't know, it just wasnt as interesting as some of them on this site.
I look forward to seeing you do another one.
good job
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liked the 2 pins behind the one that shot the bowling ball. didnt look like it took you tooo long. what i would suggest is to have the bowling balls get pissed off after there buddy died and then have a huge battle scene... bowling balls vs bowling pins. you know like in starwars and stuff. just an idea. liked the art..
james
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interesting to see A Christmas Carol
in 5 minutes.
cool animation style.
musical lyrics good but not my taste in genre
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there are too many frames. it makes it go too slow..
example. after you made the guy knife the sweeper in the head, you had the guy walk off. more speed needed there
if your gonna do stickmen animation they should have something that all the other stickman animations dont have. be creative.
actually drawing characters looks better than stickmen anyways..
good try
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ha i dont know where to start! I loved the art, and i DONT think you should redraw their faces! Good style... my sound wasnt working so i couldnt review that, but the rest was really good. Keep up the good work!
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I think you could have put a bit more effort into that ay? ... its basically like watching the game without getting to play. maybe more interesting deaths. would have made it more worth while. good try.
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animation was alright... i dunno though that was really quite sick. not my style humour...
all i know is i'm glad i didnt have a dad that dumb. lol
good job.. i guess
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The graphics i liked, i liked the over heating gun, it entertained me to kill bugs (especially big ones) but after a while it began to be a tad boring. Perhaps you could have made a bit less over heating, and more interesting bug movement. It was good though.
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